That's a neat little concept, although the game seems unfinished, or bugged? At one point walking right just results in an endless darkness, or the camera freezing in one spot.
You should definitely find someone to proofread your text for spelling and grammar, or use an online service. It doesn't take long, and would improve the overall perception people have of your game. Same for how text is presented in game: the first character's line was extremely small and hard to read when playing in browser, and the line with "PLEASE GO TO THE TALL TOWER" just disappeared way too fast.
Overall not bad for a first project!
P.S. Some links in description for music sources are broken, although you should be able to fix the description through "Edit game" page.
Thanks for the comment i do understand what you mean i do feel the game is very bugged like very but i like made those cutscenes and text's in the last few hours lol so yeah and same for the enemy i just dont know how to make it work and for the background being black well i do know that part although unfortunutly i didnt realise until the deadline and for the camera being frozen what it does? well i didnt know i tested the game many times and it didnt frezze and your also right about how its unfinished and i have the same answer i didnt have time even though 1 week is a lot i never made a game before so its pretty short to me lol and i also think that i wanna continue working on the game it was a fun experience but i do wanna use the things i learned to make it better longer and just better in overall
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That's a neat little concept, although the game seems unfinished, or bugged? At one point walking right just results in an endless darkness, or the camera freezing in one spot.
You should definitely find someone to proofread your text for spelling and grammar, or use an online service. It doesn't take long, and would improve the overall perception people have of your game. Same for how text is presented in game: the first character's line was extremely small and hard to read when playing in browser, and the line with "PLEASE GO TO THE TALL TOWER" just disappeared way too fast.
Overall not bad for a first project!
P.S. Some links in description for music sources are broken, although you should be able to fix the description through "Edit game" page.
Thanks for the comment i do understand what you mean i do feel the game is very bugged like very but i like made those cutscenes and text's in the last few hours lol so yeah and same for the enemy i just dont know how to make it work and for the background being black well i do know that part although unfortunutly i didnt realise until the deadline and for the camera being frozen what it does? well i didnt know i tested the game many times and it didnt frezze and your also right about how its unfinished and i have the same answer i didnt have time even though 1 week is a lot i never made a game before so its pretty short to me lol and i also think that i wanna continue working on the game it was a fun experience but i do wanna use the things i learned to make it better longer and just better in overall